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Tuesday, July 8, 2008

I had a million thoughts #3

I attempt to give way…. to my thoughts…
Make them …transparent
When I’m awake…in bed….

And I toss…it’s apparent…
My mind…has something…heavy…

And I’m trying to bare it
But I’m consumed…

So when God whispers…I can’t… hear it
Makes me feel…a bit…overwhelmed…
All these thoughts……jammed…

Into a…. small space
Forces me…to tune out the world…

And get down …on my face
Pray for understanding…

And peace….to take place
Then He transforms…

The chaos…to tranquility…
With His grace…


21 comments:

Dreamy said...

girl that sounds like me on a daily basis, thats why i have my handy dandy journal to get all of my feelings out. Plus my solace is on the patio where i look at God and we can talk. i so feel you on this one mami

Dreamy said...

ha and i am first!!!!

im gonna write a post about you, dont worry its gonna be good!!!

12kyle said...

wow! that sounded like what i went through last week.

good post!

Ticia said...

Hey - something happened the first time I posted -

But I understand - I gotta get things tighter

All-Mi-T [Thought Crime] Rawdawgbuffalo said...

his is most def
Grace

Anonymous said...

Nice.

I was awake in bed at 1am and my mind was heavy. *sigh*

Babz Rawls Ivy said...

Sister,

I live on my knees in prayer...what is the point of getting up. IN prayer is where I ought to be...reveling in his grace.

You are amazing!

Mizrepresent said...

Oh, i so love this...can't he do it for you! YES HE CAN!

Sexxy Luv said...

god is good! never lets you down always on time!
:)

kit von b. said...

this shit was ill keish.

-KB

Jazzy said...

Niiiiiiiiice!

I'm consumed with heavy thoughts a lot of the time these days my self. I hate when I can't sleep and when I have heavy thoughts weighing me down.

Anonymous said...

This is SO DEEP! LOVEDDDDDD THISSSSSSSSSS ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Anonymous said...

One word "DEEP"

Keith said...

I really enjoyed this post.. Lord
knows my mind has been heavy lately. Sometimes I feel guilty because I don't talk to God enough,
and I fail to realize that he'll still comfort me, no matter how neglectful of him I've been...He's
not us humans..who will pout when we've been neglected..His Grace and his mercy is everlasting!

(Oh...I saw your post on Dreamy's
recent entry...You don't really
pole dance do you?- Just thought
I'd ask...lololol..just kidding.

You have a very nice Blog and from your posts on other people's
blogs, I can tell you are a warm
and loving spirit.

Sandy said...

u are a gifted writer/poet indeed. thx 4 sharing sis i soooooo feel you! :)

Eb the Celeb said...

***Snaps***

Beautiful!

Internal Quest said...

good post...deep stuff

Miss Snarky Pants said...

When was the last time I told you that I love your way with words :-)??

CHA CHA said...

this was exceptional

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